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Development Of Information In Essay

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A general rule of thumb most strong thesis statements begin as an opinion and then what happens is you develop information you obtain research to help support that idea and give it a little more weight now there are two types of thesis statements closed versus open and you may not be aware of this you might not have heard this before most of you are probably more familiar with the closed thesis statement because it’s more typical in the five paragraph essay it’s also something that people might call a three-pronged thesis and what means is that you have all three points that are based in your thesis statement so look at this thesis statement. Read more on how information should evolve through your essay at Edusson.

That’s a closed thesis Jane is a bad student because she arrives late to class never takes notes and refuses to do her homework and you see how we built each problem becomes the topic of one of the body paragraphs we have the prongs in there she arrives late to class she never takes notes she refuses to do her homework and then we pull each of those out and that first little point becomes paragraph 1 the second little point becomes paragraph 2 the third parent little point becomes paragraph 3 and that’s what we focus on but you know we really want to go beyond that or do something more than that and sometimes this is the most simplified version and it’s okay to write but as you become a better writer as you become more advanced in your writing skills always try to move beyond that okay because this format is very limiting it’s gonna be a very limiting format for you to look at what you may want to consider is an open thesis as opposed to the closed thesis because an open thesis will allow more flexibility it gives you more opportunity to expand what you’re writing.

And it’s especially helpful if you’re trying to write beyond a five paragraph essay if you want to have you know if you need 10 paragraphs or you need many more paragraphs the open thesis it offers an umbrella statement under which all the paragraph points might fall but it doesn’t pinpoint exactly what each paragraphs gonna be about it doesn’t have those three prongs so the close thesis we looked at before Jane is a bad student because she arrives late to class never takes notes and refuses to do her homework if I were gonna just make that an open thesis statement I could just write Jane as a bad student that’s opinion that’s rooted in some argumentative point that the rest of my essay can defend our support and I can add additional points I don’t have to just rely on those the fact that she arrives late to class she never takes notes she refuses to do her homework I can move beyond those points if I need to and I don’t have to feel restricted into making each point about one paragraph.

Engaging In Essay Writing

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I think you know your essay is a great offer for you to demonstrate your writing skills you know you might not have anywhere else within the application where you can really talk at length or write at length and so you know show us your writing skills show us how you think are you a mature and thoughtful writer you know how you put a story together how do you present yourself you think the things a really great opportunity for you to be able to do that and really think about how you want to portray yourself to the college admissions officers okay so we are gonna jump to one of the questions that’s at the top here with 55 up votes very important question and says it feels difficult sometimes to write about a certain essay topic without it feeling too cliche do you have any tips regarding how to keep said si said topic whatever it may be while still making it unique enough to maintain at colleges interest oh this one. Find motivation for your essay on Robotdon.com.

I kind of alluded to it earlier ah everybody’s approach to something is gonna be different and so I might like something so my friend might like something but the reasons why and the my personal background my engagement with it might be different what are you getting out of it why do you continue doing these things think about that next level of engagement with that topic and then it becomes unique to you and that’s when it is really special and and that’s how one of a million essays about a certain topic that’s what helps those emerge in the process because I’m really learning about you and not just about that topic absolutely I absolutely agree with that just the opportunity to delve into what it means to you as opposed to what it might mean to everyone and I think you know yes you are probably going to write about something that’s someone else in the world it is also going to write about.

But it is it is going to be different because it is from your perspective which is exactly what we’ll was saying right when we’ve been in this for a lot of years and you’ve read thousands and thousands of applications we are still committed to advocating for you and supporting you through the process and getting to know who you are and what that looks like in your context so and don’t don’t worry if it sounds cliched I think that if you really do engage in it and you would get in it in the writing of that story should the writing not just don’t think don’t don’t think about the story too much think about how you want to convey that story with the writing that you have and and I promise it is not going to sound cliched it is gonna sound unique if you are really really engage in it yeah okay okay I know that’s always a difficult part of writing a college essay.

How To Write An Expository Essay

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In this lesson you will learn how to plan and write an expository essay first we’re going to be figuring out what the prompt is asking second would be planning out what you are going to write third you want to write your essay let’s start by figuring out what the prompt is asking and let’s take a look at our sample prompt today the prompt says all of us have had friends in our lives think about friends you have had in your life now write to explain why friends are important so if I really am thinking about what the prompt is asking I want to pay close attention to the last line first of all I can tell this is an expository prompt because it’s asking me to explain something I know I’m writing an essay second.

I can see that I’m going to be writing an essay about why friends are important that is my topic so now that I know that my point what my prompt is asking I need to plan out what it is I’m going to write and before I can make a plan I need to think about what has to go in to an expository essay so a good expository essay always has a focus statement the focus statement states what the topic of the essay is a good essay also has two main ideas main ideas are reasons why the focus statement is true an essay should also include anecdotes anecdotes are examples that prove the main ideas finally my essay needs a conclusion a conclusion wraps up the essay by restating the main ideas using synonyms now that I know what goes into an expository essay I’m ready to make my plan so once again the prompt is asking to explain why friends are important.

So let’s set up my plan first I need to plan out a focus statement and all I need to do here is state that my essay is going to be about explaining why friends are important so my simple focus statement is friends are important to me for many reasons now I need my first main idea my main idea number one this is the first reason why friends are important to me primarily my friends help me out of tight spots that’s one of the reasons why I think friends are important notice how I’ve written my main idea I’m writing it first as a complete sentence and I always start with a transition this time I used primarily but another good transition is to begin with next after my transition I have the topic my friends and then I have my specific reason why friends are important to me now that I’ve given my first main idea I need two anecdotes to prove it two examples of how friends have helped me out of tight spots so I’m going to jot down the time Betsy helped me make vines and when Lindsey helped me out after I broke my leg now I’m ready to write my main idea.

Information You Will Find Helpful About The Pet Insurance

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I am sure many of you have heard about Insurance for your pet and have wondered is it worth it.

Well we decided to sign up both our dogs and our experiences have been terrible to great. When we submitted our first claim form the company requested all of Parker’s past medical files. Once they received them they sent us back an updated policy that told us that he wouldn’t be covered for some things because they were pre-existing. So his first few claims they wouldn’t pay on and that was very frustrating to us. But, here we go with the good stuff, when Parker started developing lumps and had to have them removed the amount of reimbursement was really good. It fell within the guidelines they had outlined but sometimes the reimbursement schedule can be difficult to decipher. Over the past two years Parker has had two malignant tumors removed, two benign tumors removed, and two teeth extracted because they cracked from “trauma”. We received money back on all these claims. Therefore, I need to write my essay to help the pet owners in their difficult life.

Here is an example of reimbursement from a claim for our dog Tenaya. The bill submitted was for $178.00. We received $115.20 back from the insurance company. More would have been better of course but getting over $100.00 was not too bad.

In the long run for us we feel it is worth having the insurance but we suggest you look at the different companies offering Pet Insurance and find the one that would fit your needs best. Some companies won’t cover medical conditions that are common among a breed. For example Hip Dysplasia is not covered for Tenaya because the they feel that Goldens are predisposed to Hip Dysplasia.

So, that is it for today’s article. Thank you so much for reading! I hope you liked it. If you did, and even if you did not, please share your opinion the the comments section below. I am very interested in what you have to say, it helps me to make my blog a bit better every day. Thank you again and have a nice day! xoxo

Tibetan Terrier – the Non-Sporting Dogs Breed

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Tibetan Terrier (AKC, UKC)

Group: Non-Sporting

The Tibetan Terrier is not really a terrier at all. It was not used to ‘go to ground’ after burrowing animals nor was it meant to dispatch vermin. And it’s believed the only reason the term was applied to the Tibetan’s name was because it was similar in size to the average terrier.

In fact, the breed may have been used to herd sheep and just might be one of the progenitors of the Hungarian Puli. This breed originated in the Lost Valley of Tibet and was regarded as a holy dog and a bringer of good luck.

The Tibetans were never sold but only presented as gifts of appreciation. That’s how Dr. A.R.H. Grieg of England acquired her first Tibetan.

She was a practising physician in India in the 1920s and was given a dog by a grateful Tibetan in appreciation for the treatment she had given his sick spouse.

The Dalai Lama also presented her with pups for her interest in the breed. When she returned to England, she established the breed there.

Though the breed may be slightly cautious and reserved, the Tibetan Terrier is an intelligent and sensitive dog that is affectionate and devoted to its family.

A dog capable of great agility as well as endurance, the Tibetan Terrier is particularly well suited for winter since its large, round feet produce a snowshoe effect. Sturdy and compact, the Tibetan is suitable for town or country living and does well with a daily walk to meet its exercise requirements.

The Most Important Things to Know About Dandie Dinmont Terriers

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Dandie Dinmont Terrier (AKC, UKC)

Group: Terrier

The Dandie Dinmont is a short-legged, rough-coated terrier whose history lies on the Scottish Borders.

The origins of the breed are not known, but as they share the same hunting skills as other breeds from the Border counties they no doubt also share the same ancestors.

Although their ancestry is not known, what is known is that, as far back as the seventeenth century, small terriers similar to today’s dogs were used by gypsies, farmers and shepherds to keep under control vermin – ranging from field-mice and rats to the larger otter, fox and polecat.

In spite of their reputation for gameness, there is no written account of the breed having a distinctive name until, in 1814, Sir Walter Scott’s novel “Guy Mannering” was published. A character in this book by the name of Dandie Dinmont – a Border farmer and sportsman – owned a number of terriers which were mustard and pepper in colouring.

In real life, James Davidson of Hindlea, near Hawick, also kept similar terriers. He used them mainly for hunting otter, as did other Border families. Scott’s story caught the public’s imagination, as it was presumed to be based on James Davidson. In fact, this was not so, but it did give the terriers their name.

Today’s Dandies have all the traits of their ancestors, although, naturally, the modern Dandie is domesticated. Like all terriers, they enjoy a country life with all its pleasures, but they do require owners that will keep them under control as they are strong characters.

They are not a popular breed in the British Isles or overseas; but, like all breeds, they have their devoted admirers who would not readily transfer their loyalty to another breed.

The first Dandie Dinmont Club was founded in 1876 and the original breed standard was set in the same year.

Shiba Inu Dog Breed Information

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Shiba Inu (AKC)

Group: Non-Sporting

The Shiba has been a native breed to Japan since the primitive ages. The word “Shiba” originally refers to something “small”, a “small dog”.

The Shiba’s habitat was in the mountainous area facing the Sea of Japan and was used as a hunting dog for small animals and birds. There were slight differences in the breeds according to the areas where they were raised.

As dogs like English Setters and English Pointers were imported from England during the period of 1868-1912, hunting became a sport in Japan and cross breeding of the Shiba width those English dogs became prevalent and a pure Shiba became rare so that by 1912-1926 pure Shibas confined to these areas became exceedingly scarce.

Hunters and other educated persons became concerned with the preservation of the pure Shibas from around 1928 and the preservation of the limited number of pure strains began seriously, and the breed standard was finally unified in 1934.

In 1936 the Shiba was designated as a natural monument after which the breed was bred and improved to become the superior breed known today.

Schipperke Dog Breeds Review

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Schipperke (AKC, UKC)

Group: Non-Sporting

The word Schipperke is Flemish for little skipper, and derives from the fact that these small active dogs were used as watchdogs, companions and ratters on barges and riverboats of Belgium.

A plucky, lively little dog with an air of self-importance, the Schipperke seems unaware of the limits of its size, defending his territory and family with a fearlessness that would do the biggest of dogs proud.

Continually preoccupied with what is happening around him, particularly what is going on behind closed doors or about any object that has been moved, the Schipperke is a real little busybody. Always reserved and wary of strangers he is very careful with anything that has been given to him to look after, being indefatigable in his duties as custodian of the household.

He is a good mouser and ratter and enjoys hunting small game if the opportunity presents itself. Loyal and devoted, the Schipperke embodies a lot of dog in a diminutive frame.

Lowchen – Information, Characteristics, Facts

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Lowchen (AKC, UKC)

Group: Non-Sporting

The history of the Lowchen is quite uncertain as no-one is quite sure exactly where the breed originated.

It is believed that the breed may have been developed somewhere in Eastern Europe between Russia and the Mediterranean.

It was the Europeans who first embraced the breed and by the 1500s they were hugely popular in France, Germany, Italy and Spain where they were kept by the aristocracy.

It was then that shaving the dogs became popular as they were apparently used as hot water bottles. The shaved area of the dog allowed the owner to have direct contact with the skin of the animal and this provided instant warmth.

Over the centuries the breed lost popularity and the Guinness Book of Records declared the Lowchen as the rarest breed in the world in the 1960s. Today, although not common, they are no longer considered rare. In Australia the breed has been around since 1970s.

Despite its rather fragile presentation, the Lowchen is reported to make an excellent guard dog. However, due to their size and somewhat puppy like behaviour a Lowchen is more likely to bark and warn off strangers, rather than deter them.

They are friendly, bright and loyal. Training is advisable, but some dogs can be slow to learn. They are active and lively dogs that enjoy playing with the family and this kind of behaviour will continue for the duration of the dog’s life.

Some owners say they can be “clowns” and are not that easy to train. Despite this, they are truly lovable and settle into a home very quickly.

Lowchens are considered part of the Bichon group, but are highly recognisable due to their unique clipped and shaved appearance.

Unclipped dogs have a long coated scruffy look. They have a short small body with a short head and dark nose and should grow no taller than about 35cm. They vary in colour from chocolate and apricot, chocolate and cream, gold, sable, black and tan, blue and cream, and parti-colours. (Chocolate are difficult to come by.) The coat is long and wavy, especially around the ears.

Do You Know About Bred for the Purpose of Wolf Hunting?

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Borzoi (AKC, UKC)

Group: Hound

Bred exclusively for the purpose of wolf hunting by the Russian aristocracy, the Borzoi is one of the most elegant and spectacular of all breeds. Rather like a Greyhound in build, but taller and with a long, silky coat which adds softness to his rather angular frame, the Borzoi is an agile, swift and courageous dog.

Although the circumstances under which the Borzoi is now kept have changed dramatically from those of Czarist Russia, he nevertheless remains a true aristocrat of the dog world.

Affectionate and devoted to his owner, he is rather aloof and distrustful of strangers. He does need a good deal of regular exercise to keep him fit, and that exercise preferably includes a certain amount of free running and playing. The Borzoi is a very independent dog and does not always immediately respond to his owner’s commands.

Not a noisy breed, the Borzoi has a quiet, gentle nature and loves to live as part of the family although he is more suitable for homes with older children and may need supervision around other small pets.

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I began life knowing I was destined to work with animals. I was the kid who always brought home the baby birds with the broken wings, chopped up earthworms for their food, and snuck into my dad’s EMT bag for gauze and tape to work my healing magic. However as I got older, and after losing a few pets of my own, I realized that being a vet wasn’t exactly the direction I could manage to go in, so I opted for Zoology and Animal Husbandry. Yes folks, I’m a certified zookeeper who once did a belly flop onto a 14-foot alligator to “capture” it after it had escaped it’s enclosure. Since this time I also started blogging, of course my favorite topics are animals, pets and nature in general. So hope you will like it.